Please respond to your first impressions of this title for our Spiritual Emphasis Campaign for the Fall:
The Compassion Journey: from selfish living to selfless giving in 40 days.
I'm looking for good help here, so please tell me whatever you think of. Good, bad, ugly. I'd rather get your feedback now than here things after we've promoted it to our community.
Thanks friends,
--Ben
2 comments:
I like it the way it is. May be add a tag: "Do unto others..." if that's the way the series is going.
on the surface, it sounds like behavior modification (just changing actions). How could you say this, and insert "changing the heart" (changing motive, the inside, etc.)
...maybe "Heart Journey"? or from heartless living to heart-filled giving (...ahhhh not as catchy)
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